@Best Ponies
What I can recommend is that when writing a comic story, it’s good keep things simple and easy to follow.
If what you want is to create a world around this story, then develop it little by little and create expectations for the next project you have in mind about this story, so that you can give it continuity and create interest in what could happen next.
Honestly, it surprises me that today there seems to be no vore artist who creates a story with real continuity that shows the consequences of making prey disappear and dealing with it.
For example, I love the context that Gum Heart has unintentionally digested somepony in the past revealed in >>3365819 (if this is canon within this comic) but I want to know more about what she did next.
Didn’t anyone ask him about her patients?
How she hide his prey’s cutie marks?
prey’s cutie mark fade over time once their magic has been completely assimilated?
Does she feel bad about what she did or does she just feel disappointed in herself for falling into temptation again?
Uhh, so why is she unconscious? The last time we saw her in this comic, she was in a “private session” with the doctor.
I’ll be honest here, I really love the comic, but the way the story is being carried out makes lose interest little by little, especially because of the gigantic update deadlines.
I mean, I’ve been following the comic since the page Twilight was eaten and so far that arc hasn’t been picked up while you’re trying to count like six other arcs happening in the background.
I mean, at this rate I’m going to assume that you will create another arc before continuing with the one on this page or you will continue with something else like Sour Drop on her date with the one who was going to be her prey.
I would have preferred that the story lean towards something more direct and simple, like how some nurse slimes devour ponies quietly while they erase their tracks so that no one notices that there are missing ponies and that among the prey that were going to disappear that day is one of the mane6 instead of this medley of stories that don’t seem to go anywhere
PS: I don’t want to sound offensive, I just want to express an opinion and of course I’m not demanding anything