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Thanks you. And that’s only since a phew week that i learned what really meant “Mary-sue”, and it wasn’t my goal, i keep working dear _
True, I was never forced to read your comic, and I will freely admit that my initial criticisms were based more on rage than facts; however, as you yourself have just stated, it doesn’t change the fact that EastStern is still a Mary-Sue. The constant shilling from other, better characters from the actual show, the reliance on contrived and/or out-of-character situations, your chronic habit of telling instead of showing%(both in the comic and out)%, and her general unlikability and untouchability don’t exactly help matters.
I keep criticizing the comic because I can see you’ve been making this out of personal passion with what few tools you have and want to see it improve; normally I’d just voice my displeasure whenever I come across something I don’t like and never even look it again, if I even think it’s worth that much effort. I can see that you’re getting gradually better in making this comic, from both a visual and a storytelling standpoint, and I’m actually really interested to see where you’re going with the character in future story arcs||, especially in the current one now that she doesn’t have her magic, title, or bodyguards to protect her from the negative repercussions of her usual antics||.
I will also freely admit that, as much as I rip-into EastStern for being a Mary-Sue, her level of Mary-Sue-ness can’t touch that of Rey from “The Force Awakens” and “The Last Jedi”…
Hey my dear, i never forced you to read my comic ! >8D
But i admit that EastStern is a bit Marie Sue. And i admit too that i have to learn more about good storyline…..i’m learning, i’m learning. X3
And i do hope offering better to the ones who read it. But you had Right, Equestria been way too patient with EastStern.
Edited
If you think what happened before gave them strained relations, just wait until you get to the part where Easter spanks CELESTIA! If there’s ever a reason for Equestria to wreck EastStern’s shit, it’s that… And yet, for whatever reason, the ponies of Equestria have been suspiciously and conveniently silent on the matter of their leader being beaten and shamed by a foreign power…
Hell, I even posted a comment on one of the later pages questioning why the Mane 6, the princesses, and Equestria in-general are still bending-over backwards to give her everything she wants on a silver platter, and I have yet to receive any form of response.
Let’s not forget the canon characters getting the idiot-ball super-glued to their backs for the sake of the so-called “plot,” too, or the fact that EastStern never suffers any long-lasting negative consequences for her actions and/or behavior like the Mary Sue that she is.
I’ve been leveling quite a bit of criticism toward this person’s work for their abysmal storytelling, complete mischaracterization/bastardization of the very concept of justice, and habitual painfully obvious shilling of this character at the expense of other, better characters from the actual show; sadly, it doesn’t look like it’ll be improving anytime soon.
At this point, I think diplomatic immunity is dead. Likely whatever happened beforehand would be problematic enough to cause at least strained relations.
LOL ! XD With you on that one !
>just because
All the reason I need.
I keep telling my dick it’s a bad comic but my dick won’t listen
I’ve already been through them prior to this, it’s just lacklustre storytelling and often spanking just because.