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Flurry’s Trap Part Two Page 1/7 Remodeled
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It is practically the same as in the one that was published months ago but here I have corrected errors etc.How would the neck, the mane and the muzzle be Enjoy it
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Alan:Agh Flurry stop, because you take me like food, FLURRY !!!
Flurry:Sorry, I can’t speak with my mouth full, Wait a minute {He Tastes As Good As Cake, if I had known I would have swallowed it long ago}
[Alan felt it slide down Flurry’s throat, just to be swallowed]
Alan:Nooooo wait Flurry, Flurry wait, don’t do it, FLURRY !!!
Flurry:¡¡GLUP!!
Alan:Nooooooo !!!!!
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To be continue…
All’sWork Studios
a LittleNight Company
By AldaírSparkle

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~StuffGuy123
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Personally, I think the first version of this page you posted is a little better. I see you tried to adjust the size of Flurry’s muzzle in the 5th panel, but now her head just looks too small compared to her body.
Otherwise this is great