@cheezedoodle  
That one’s cute too.

I’m doing a couple of alternate hairstyle versions of this, here’s the first one:
 

@Background Pony #84C3  
Word.

she captain of night divition of twilight guards and flash is the captain of day divition! but sometime both switch place but tell twilight for this! tempest is her name as a royal guards but only her friends and family call her by her real name! sometime she help pinkie pie! pinkie tell tempest her own real! and this day tempest call pinkie Pinkamena and pinkie call her fizzlepop by repter to on other and as friends pinkie be 2er pony become her friends! in the royal guard is be hard! mose guard hate her for what she done to the princess! flash is the one who give a chance! shining too but is cadance ask him to do it! flash and tempest become captain mose the same time! twilight and her friends be very happy for her! she live on ponyville! she protect kids for get the thing she on her age! but befor she join the royal twilight and flash mark to see her family! and funny her family live on ponyville! flash is the best friends royal guards of tempest for belive in her! some guard continue ti hate her but dont say it for reason luna say to Shut up of it! and were the princess say it you shut it! tempest continue to work hard repay the kindness of her first real friends Princess Twilight Sparkle! she change her mane style to this! sometime pinkie put mane style like her old mane style to look her and take a picture of it and both smile on it! and fluttershy help fond her own pet and is a dog and this dog name rex and rex be one of the first royal guards dogs who help a lot! and on her free time she play with him! rex is very smart dog! tempest love dress of rarity and is rarity make her new mane style! she do some race with applejack and rainbow! and one years got a very tied score with them and but flash win mose all! but he lost all time iron houve face tempest! tempest got 2 years none lose a one iron houve! big mac too lose! she say well i server this jeck i dont say name! and rainbow say * storm king!* but everypony look her with none happy face! twilight say to her to not say this name form her! but wont the bad thing got on her new live she be very happy! were twilight got a dauther she become the mose favourite royal guards to princess sakura sparkle alter her dad! sakura is alicorn princess love do like her mom and she love play with flurry heart! tempest watch her to make sure she save! tempest want love with a unicorn guard name starblade! and later got married and got a dauther name lolipop berrytwist and she become very good friend with sakura and flurry heart! her friend call her lily! and she want the royal guard of sakura like mom be the royal guard of twilight! lily learn form past mistake of her mom to none do the same for be the best!  
tempest can’t ask a better live! this is happy live she looking for long time! but lily love play one the old friend of her mom who him too server the the one we mose not say the name close to tempest! him work on the sugarcube coner!

Absolutely beautiful.

I want her in the show just like this.

Happy Berrytwist is awesome Berrytwist. I’d love to see how her and Flash get along.

Most of her entries on fimfiction involve Fizzle-chan becoming Twilight’s personal guard.

I would love to see Tempest Shadow as the captain of Twilight’s royal guard.

Having her smile and let her hair down makes her look so different.

I’m not sure how to feel about this mane. It’s cuter, sure, but I liked her old Mohawk for its badassery.
 
But other than that, good pic.

I love the cutie mark and armor designs you made for her.

I want this to happen!

Really nice design. ^^