@Background Pony #8084  
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@Background Pony #8084  
My problem isn’t whether they are right are wrong. If you’re going to say something is bad, provide why it is bad in a constructive manner so that the artist can improve from it. Otherwise you’re just voicing that you don’t like something in a manner that you want the artist to feel bad for working on it.

@Midori Kuroba
 
The thing is though, they’re right. The art IS good, but the writing comes off as bad. The plot here isn’t good… THAT’S why people are hoping for some sort of actual PAY OFF here. If that happens, then while the writing is poor, it’s a salvageable storyline. If not, then really, what was all this for at ALL? It’s knowingly wrongful torment of someone and we’re supposed to cheer for the antagonist? That’s not how it works. Nobody said that Circe didn’t work hard on it. We know that she did. But that doesn’t automatically make it great, if the writing really IS bad. I’m still hoping for a good payoff at the end of this. Again, the art IS good. No arguing that, but the writing here, you cannot say is good unless you legit don’t care about the writing in the first place.

@Background Pony #799E  
Artwork and Writing are two completely different mediums, and mastering them both is a challenge. But Circe worked long and hard on this comic. Does it go a lot of different directions with references not everyone will get? Are there issues with the writing? Yes, but there are a lot of factors to that. Circe has written amazing stories in the past, sometimes with no dialogue at all! But there are times when even I become passionate about an idea and it ends up falling flat when I write it out and present it to others. Circe’s drive was to make something not only her girlfriend would enjoy, but others too, which is why this comic is more than twice as long as the previous ones. It might not be her best work, and it might receive a lot of negative criticism, but when it’s done, plenty of people will actually like it. I doesn’t have to be you or any of the other critiques, but it’s a lot easier to say something sucks, than to take the time and effort to do what she did.
 
@Circe-my-friend-and-the-best-goth-gal, yeah, this message was for you the whole time. You’re amazing, so don’t let criticism both you too much. Just keep improving, and no matter what, I look forward to the rest, and what you do next. ;)

God this is bad writing.
 
Actually everything but the art style is practically infuriating in how low quality it is.

@Background Pony #8084  
Oh, I have a feeling that Blue Nile will get caught, some time later, with Rarity ready to get her revenge on the very last page.  
I also have a feeling that Rarity will never… e-e-ever, be the same again after this punishment.

It’s amazing how much someone can want a “Fetish” comic to turn into a snuff comic. I really want this Blue Nile character to at least get some hell back for this rather than getting away with all this free.

@Starswirl  
That’s a… very fair point. XD

Sweetie Belle might actually come in any minute.

@raw19  

@Midori Kuroba  
@Dusk Star Shine
 
Then use your Shadow Clone Jutsu and 4 Summoning Crests to call upon the powers of Cthulhu and bring death to the infidels!

@Dusk Star Shine  
YEAH! And then activate One For All and punch her in the sky, before shooting her with a kamehameha! But make sure you don’t go in the basement, the killer is there. V.V

Rarity for the Fuck of everything HOLY, just over charge your horn so it will shatter the ring on your horn and then fire a blast of magic at that Bitch so it will shot right through her cold black heart.

Poor Rarity.

just look at that exposed rump

Silly Nile.
 
On that topic, I wonder how soon before she accidentally hurts herself again.