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Oc of Edgy McEdgerson, just trying to prove I can make a black-and-red unicorn look badass.
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Point I’m not-so-subtly trying to make is, “please let me draw a better one.”
It was drawn in an hour, so I’ll give you that.
No problems with the OC itself.
Just that this thing looks…. wobbly.
Sloppy. Etc. Sorry.
You must have a terrible time watching the show itself, mate. I do see some of the perspective cheats I did not intend, though.
I was thinking your problem was with the OC itself.
Edited
Well, it’s…
Hmph. It’s very hard to discern its features…
What angle is it at? The muzzle makes me think it’s in profile. But the ears look like 3/4! The horn is nearly at the top of the head! How big is that head? How big is that eye? What is that mouth doing? How long is his neck, and how big is that chest - it seems that the legs would already start showing somewhere…
Is that spike supposed to be in the middle of the chest?
Is the skull deformed? Is the horn deformed?
Ha. Learn anatomy once and you cringe every time you spot something wrong, even and especially if it’s your own work, eh? Kinda wish it were mine, though, you highlight stuff better than I do…
Why not? I enjoyed the challenge, and I think I made it look considerably better than the original. I applied a good understanding of aesthetics, solid from and presentation… what shall I focus on next time?
No.
Using muted colors for his body - maroons and dusky blues - allows the bright highlight to really pop. Also, metalic armor stands out against all the darkness for a striking effect.