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Sung & Amas EQG Doujin  
Chapter 2
 
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Poptard
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@Millennial Dan  
I’ll just leave the link here and walk away. Gee, somebody would be able to click on it and I wouldn’t even be able to tell! (Don’t mind the downvotes, just tons of knee-jerk Flash hate. Better formatting and grammar than most stories on that site)
Millennial Dan
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@Poptard  
I can’t say I’m any kind of fan of literary sex scenes. That just seems in all ways awkward to me.
 
The conflict you mention is, as you said, basically the same thing here, so I suppose I’ll be able to enjoy it this way without the discomfort of that other stuff.
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@Millennial Dan  
That’s kind of the conflict. Weird alternate dimensions stuff, Human Twi and Equestria Twi’s differences (Human Twi hates unicorns for one), Twilight having a panic attack over realizing that someone sees her as attractive…
 
But it has really good porn that’s well written. That places it above 85% of most fanfics at least. Also, it was written by the guy who wrote the most popular Death Note crossover. Gotta diversify.
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@Poptard  
That is… just… wow.
 
I mean, I like the ship and all, but man that is lemony. And it would be pretty treacherous too, posing as someone else like that, even if it is your alt-universe double. Just for the sake of a little action with the popular handsome dude. Not cool.
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@Millennial Dan  
Makes more sense in the end. The human Twilight is still emotionally traumatized by a “Unspeakable Incident,” something so embarrassing that it was the reason human Twilight transferred away. As Flash was always the most popular guy at school, Twilight had a crush. Flash mistook human Twilight for the Equestria Twilight, who he was dating, and human twilight enjoyed being treated nicely too much to correct him.
 
And then they fucked. At least that part was really well written.
Background Pony #D7BA
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I believe I read that fic. it was marked as incomplete last I checked. the interesting fics always take the longest…
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Come to think of it, I read a fic with this premise. Human Twilight visits her old school, she’s suddenly popular. When she goes to Flash’s house to explain it to him (she’s still had a massive crush), she breaks down and has heartwarming sex. Good fic.
Background Pony #AE0D
All the girls look great in this doujin (even if it’s their EG outfit) but dude,Flash get the short end of the stick and look like a creep  
And in the movie,i’m sorry but he looks somehow too….smug IMO  
Yep,definetely the best thing about Flash is his pony counterpart.More cute,and dont look like a smug dudebro or a creep
James Rye
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Awww, poor Human Twily. She gets talked to by a handsome guy and he talks about SOMEBODY else who just happened to look like her and had her name and a pretty similar personality…girl, just go with the flow and snack that guy! xD
Evowizard25

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Nice one. Hopefully this comic won’t make Flash some kind of jerk or something like that. Gets old and he was a nice guy. {A little fleshing out could really help him.}