Mr. Reznor, is that you?

Good start, but remember that her mane isn’t rooted in the center of her head. I’ve made that mistake before in an early picture I drew, and even today I’m still kicking myself for it. The fringe essentially comes from the center of her head, but the roots then travel diagonally toward the ears. Thus ensureing that no matter which way her mane is flipped, it never looks like a straight line running along the center of her head.
 
Pony manes may not/should not work that way - even in FiM, but that’s how Fluttershy’s hair seems to be.

oh i hope it turns out good.

It’s not finished yet.

this ones kinda poor