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Again, most of this has sync’d back up with the original concept I had. There was a little bit here where Twilight tells everyone else to give her some room and they back away, and the whole second page was something that was developed fairly recently, as things kind of went along, but otherwise things are back on track.

Also, that part where Chrysalis says friendship makes her feel like she’s covered in spiders and wants to run away screaming, followed by Pinkie immediately going “Oh, so you DO know what friendship feels like!” was a completely unintentional joke that I didn’t even see at first. I’m still laughing at it.

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Power-Up&Sky-Blue

2 PWNYZ in 1

This broken starving bug you are now doesn’t have to be who you are.
Anyone can change for the better, even you.
Let friendship into that hole-filled heart of yours Chrysalis and become whole!

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Starswirl

Well, she did have somepony just give her love one time. Thorax. When she was forcibly ripping out his lifeforce, and Starlight convinced him to just let go and freely share with Chrysalis. She couldn’t handle it.

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