The symbolism from the POV with the gigantic castle looming behind Misty.

Nice touch.

The giant door and the bridge look like an oversize throne.

@Background Pony #4646
I get that, not really my best story ether, I might edit that part

@heart04winds
I find it disrespectful to take a story about abuse and write a story about a human mating with a pony and rating her being “too skinny for his tastes” in the comment section. just kinda bad taste.

@Background Pony #C590
No problem . we will wait Tell us if you need help

@Background Pony #C590
Take as long as you need, we love this! And thank you for continuing to work to bring us such beautiful (and brutal) stories

i have rough ideas in my mind, but getting these out so rapidly is still taking a toll on me. might have been a stupid decision to do all of this through 4chan again, but i still want to continue. it might take longer. thanks for sticking by me.

@heart04winds
“…giant pony-eating eel…” I can’t even
♥

one day our hero-… protaganist Johnny Brovo in another failed attempt to pick up chicks found himself falling into a mirror, this was not any mirror but a portal that landed him in a colorful pastel land “when did I land into a children’s book?” he asked as he took a look around

“hello, who are yo-” Misty asked as she approached this strange creature before Johnny pressed a finger to her lips

“woah pretty momma, just a second” Johnny reaches in his pocket and pulls out his hand written note book, flipping though pages until he lands on a section intitled ‘what to do if you find yourself in another world with creatures other than people: refer to Harkness test’ “do you have human or greater intelligence?”

“I don’t know about human but I think I am pretty smart” Misty blinks

“can you talk or otherwise communicate with language?” Johnny asks

“… I am relatively sure I can” Misty tilts her head

“are you of sexual maturity for your species?” Johnny asks with a raise of his eyebrow

“yes, are you saying you want to… mate with me?” Misty blushes deep imagining herself with this other creature, she wondered what his… equipment looked like while he looked her up and down

“No offense but You look i bit… unhealthy, treat yourself to a sandwich and we’ll talk” Johnny tells her “are there any other ladies here? anthropomorphic maybe?”

“I don’t know what you mean by anthropomorphic” Misty rubs her chin and thinks, maybe if Opaline had a mate she would not be as cruel to her “but I do know of someone you can mate with, just in that castle”

“why diddin’t you say so before, I’ll make my way there” Johnny gets up and makes his way to the castle

later at the castle

“so you want to mate with me?” Opaline looked down on him

“dang straight pretty momma” Johnny smiled and gave her finger guns

“dispite us being of different species” she squints her eyes

“well I am trapped here and like a wise man once said every new species is a new opportunity” he smirks as he looks her up

“… right well if you want to work with me then I have a task for you, follow me” Opaline said as she stepped down from her thrown and lead him down a hall and opens a door where there where several controls, buttons and knobs formed with crystals “this is the control room for the entire castle, all you have to do is stay here and make sure no one touches a thing, understand?”

“can do pretty momma” Johnny saluted her as he checked her out when she walked away “maybe being stuck in a different wold won’t be so bad, their parts are vaguely familiar, I should be alright here”

a few minutes later and he started to feel a chill, he tried to tough it out bit it really started to bug him “one of these things has to be the thermostat” he said as he started pushing and turning random knobs and buttons

Opaline was taking a shower at that time until she started sceaming form overly hot water “I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU NOT TO TOUCH THOSE CONTROLS!” she shouted from the royal bathroom

“I’m sorry!! I can fix it!!” Johnny panicked as he pushed and twisted random knobs and buttons doing verrious things as Opaline tried to go down the stairs turned into a slide and she went careening down and slipped past the door splashed into the moat

“YOU IMBACIL!! GET ME OUT OF THIS WATER NOW!!” Opaline demanded

“I’m sorry your majesty!! I’ll get a rope!!” Johnny said as he went through a closet next to the door pulling out various objects until he found the rope “I got it!! I am coming right dow-” before he got the chance to save her Opanine was eaten in one gulp by a giant pony eating eal that swam in the swamp, shocked and horrified for a moment Johnny stood there until he came to this simple conclusion “welp that was awful, not my fault though” he said as he went to the closest town he could see Mareitime Bay

First time seeing the door of the castle from outside…

Nice photo. Make her tell Sunny and her friends about Opaline before I leap into the screen and slap Opaline myself 😭

This has no right to be so damned cute
Look at little Misty!!!!! ♥